-THIS MANGA IS READ LIKE A TRADITIONAL MANGA, FROM RIGHT TO LEFT-

Page 33 of the first chapter of the Star of Destiny manga.

Last night proved to be a bit useful to me. I got in touch with an old friend of mine, who happens to be penciler for a comic book. I showed her the manga, to which she was able to provide a lot of comments that, overall, should help improve the manga.

Now is an even better time to see us trying to improve, as after page 35 we finally get to see some action. Mind you, the action contained in chapter 1 is very low compared to what we'll see in the future. This was done on purpose, since the "fights" in chapter 1 are not anywhere near as important as future battles.


After hearing that the stranger is heading to Nandoleh, Veon and Star offer to join him.

Artwork © *meomeoow
Characters, Story, and All Related Material © ~Skye-McCloud