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Warning: This comic reads from RIGHT to LEFT, like japanese graphic novels (or manga) are done!

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All Star of Destiny pages ask for advanced critique. You're welcome to critique both art and story, though I request critique on the story more as that is my half of the work.

Any other feedback you have would be welcome!

Don't know what this is? This is a part of the webcomic, Star of Destiny! You can find many more pages over at www.starofdestiny.com, so go there to read!

Artwork by ~meomeoow
Star of Destiny and its characters © Drew Byrne, aka me.
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:icontadpole7:
Great job by the artist on panels 1 and 2, very good. :D

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I dunno, I prefer panel three. :D

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:icontadpole7:
Panel three feels like it could be tuned up a notch in the details but...I've been accused of being a little nuts about details. They were all good though, one of the best pages in the chapter.

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I like three not for the detail, but rather for the expression. Leon is suppose to be a scary dude. The idea of seeing his insane grin is suppose to make you scared, especially when you get into his character and understand what he is, who he is, and why he does what he does.

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