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Panel three feels like it could be tuned up a notch in the details but...I've been accused of being a little nuts about details. They were all good though, one of the best pages in the chapter.
I like three not for the detail, but rather for the expression. Leon is suppose to be a scary dude. The idea of seeing his insane grin is suppose to make you scared, especially when you get into his character and understand what he is, who he is, and why he does what he does.
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